This story is too cool and adventurous
I am a Year 4 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. My teacher is Miss H. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Friday, March 19, 2021
DLO Dorothy
This is the story about wizard of oz and dorothy the lion the scarecrow and the tin woodman this is my story bye bye!
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Hi Kaylla, I love reading your writings so much! but just make sure you add full stops and capital letters! I am going to tell you a clue, Good writers read their writing again and again and check if it makes sense, and they also make sure that their words are all spelled wright! Hey, can you make some writing and post it? From Adhithi😊🏆🥇
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